Yey! You did post it!
Somehow, this song plays and it's longer than most of your work but it feels like it goes faster sometimes. Once I get beyond the first introduction of vocals, the rest of the track calls forward my attention. The vocals settle down and I'm lost for a bit.
No. I'm not biased.
I am 100% enjoying the dark aesthetic in this track, it's incredibly alluring. Toxic, at the same time.
The autonomy of emotion is practically overwhelming. I feel like it's kneading me, bit by bit, into the depths of its sound.
-impressed-
*turns it all the way up*
Best way ever to start my day.
Can't believe this took so long to upload, it's so sexy.
Short has nothing to do with it.
It's poetry.
This is probably my favorite thus far.
The lyrics made me grin like I've lost one too many marbles. I probably have but that's beside the point. This has a very underhanded, manipulative, revenge filled, vindictive vibe, and I'm really liking it.
Bravo on lyrical delivery, the variation was well placed and spaced and accentuated the mood.
O_O Listening to so much of you singing finally reminded me of
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GAO7Zo 2xIFg - Royal Trux
If you haven't heard of em... I think you should give them a try. They seem like they might be right up your alley.
Anyway, I really like these lyrics and the way they are delivered.
I think a semi-hard drum could really accent the voice. Not really to give it a garage feel, just more kick. @_@ Yeah.
The lyrics are awesome and I like the way they are delivered.
I like the lyrics but the presentation of voice provides disingenuous delivery for me. The effect on the voice is detracting (for me) and would be much more interesting (I think) if you recorded your own background vocals and layered them with your primary vocals.
Of course, I'm not entirely sure what the goal was here. Perhaps you met your personal goal. The track beneath the voice is not helping it along or really accentuating in any way. This has the poential to be a short and sweet track. The melancholy is too strong, I feel like I just woke up to find my nose fell off.
When I closed my eyes, I heard this much better. My eyes kept wanting to see the sounds. So instead of spacing out and missing half of it, I closed em. I really enjoyed this piece because there is a harsh element that comes along with it. Like being in a dark alley under the full moon, which you realize is totally beautiful, but you can't stop because a crazy guy is coming with a chainsaw aimed about level with your head.
If that makes sense. X_X
Simply put, interesting, beautiful, insistent, and abrupt, and all of it works. There is thought to this which makes it attention grabbing.
Even though I downloaded this and it's on my playlist I still come here when I'm totally in my browser and too lazy to care about winamp. Plus, the visualizations are different... or maybe I just want a reason to lurk.
This song is one of my favs. The shift at 1:06 always gets me smiling and I don't even realize it. The different stages through the track really allow for a wonderful build. This is definitely a go-to song for me. It's just so awesome. ^_^
Lurk away. You're always welcome here.
Art. Music. Or. Bust.
Age 39, Female
Writer/Artist
Colorado Technical University
Illinois
Joined on 7/24/13
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